Back to WORK – Bill Millin and D-Day

Bill Millin plays bagpipes for soldiers, 1944
Bill Millin plays his pipes for fellow soldiers in 1944.

This past summer got BUSY … and interesting!  As many of you know I had a few adventures as a professional SCUBA diver, working at various locations around western Washington.  While it was great to get back in the water and blow bubbles, it also required me to shift my priorities.  Big among those priorities was the completion of my second bookAs many of you ALSO know this project is a Highland bagpipe sheet music & tune history book I am writing as a fundraiser for a veteran’s organization I am a member of.  There are a few chunky tasks remaining before publication.  The most challenging of these is writing about Bill Millin, a bagpiper who played on D-Day.

The legend of Bill Millin is well-known in the Highland bagpipe community.  The short story that everyone knows is that “Piper Bill” went ashore on Sword Beach* — he carried no firearm, wore a kilt, played bagpipes, and never got shot by German forces because they thought he had gone insane.  While all of this is true and I already knew from lore, I have been formally researching the whole story and it is far more detailed.
(*Queen Red, the furthest east section of the invasion)

Bill Millin, Highland bagpipes, landing, Queen Red, Sword Beach.
Bill Millin with his bagpipes landing on the Queen Red section of Sword Beach.

It is an honor to be writing about this man’s role in the June 6, 1944, Normandy invasion and it is important to me that I get it right.  I have reached out for every information source I can locate.  Presently I have a considerable stack of library books on D-Day, audiobooks and e-books, media on order, one film, along with articles and interviews I’ve found online.  Something I am particularly excited about is that I have made contact with Bill Millin’s son and grandson online and they have agreed to review my work once complete.  Also, it seems that each time I stop by the library to pick up another piece of media I’ve ordered, I find and buy a D-Day or WWII book from their used book rack.  Apparently I’m building my own D-Day/WWII library $3 at a time!

The bronze life-size statue of Piper Bill Millin unveiled on 8 June 2013 at Colleville-Montgomery, near Sword, in France.

As I review these history sources I have found some problems in the information.  Generally speaking I have books written by historians and articles written by journalists.  Some of the errors I have identified due to my Highland bagpipe playing career.  Some of the errors seem to be words and concepts the previous writers did not fully understand.  The biggest problem I have been finding is historical inconsistencies.  Generally the greater collection of errors come from the journalists — these individuals tend to work at a faster pace with less study than historians.  Usually I can sift through the historical inconsistencies by applying information from military documents along with identifying the details that are consistent in history books and interviews from Bill Millin himself.

As said it is an honor to be writing about this man.  It is an honor as a bagpiper and as the grandson of WWII veterans.  My aim is to help clean up some of the history mistakes that have developed and promote the greater story of Bill Millin’s role in D-Day among my piping peers along with my non-piping readers.  I am sure that you too will be impressed by this one aspect of The Greatest Generation and the greatest invasion in the history of the world.

Books and Other Media

Middle-grade and Youth-oriented Books
  • D-Day by Charlie Samuels – Part of the “Turning Points In US Military History” collection, for its target audience this book looked excellent!
  • D-Day / A True Book by Peter Benoit – This book is similar to the Charlie Samuels’ text … only that I’m uncomfortable with a history book that says it is a ‘true’ history book.
  • D-Day / The Invasion of Normandy 1944 by Rick Atkinson – I plowed through the Atkinson book looking for information on my subject.  In my opinion based on the other books I have studied, the author glosses over details and frequently presents them with gross mistakes.
  • D-Day / The WWII Invasion That Changed History by Deborah Hopkinson – I’m frankly disappointed by this book.  Picking it up it appears to be on-par with the work of Cornelius Ryan and Stephen Ambrose (ETC) — the book is large and thick — but that is a first impression only.  Upon closer inspection, as an author I can tell you there are a few tricks that have been used to make the book appear more impressive.  The two main tricks is that the book is not single-spaced and it is loaded with pictures; take out the photos, make it single spaced, and it is half the length at best.  This 2018 publication does not appear to present anything new on the topic and is possibly written in such a manner as to not ‘offend’ the Politically Correct (ETC) crowd &/or to spoon-feed D-Day to the delicate middle-grade blue-ribbon crowd.  The good thing I can say about the book is that it is worth it for accessing the D-Day related pictures … other than that, other books are in my opinion better information sources whereas this one is comparatively watered-down.  And for my uses … no apparent mention of Bill Millin on Sword Beach or at Pegasus Bridge.

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Adventures in Authordom – 2nd Book Edition

To Preface …

Not my truck — this one’s a beaut by comparison!

During the last number of months (or years?) I have been writing blog posts here and on my BagpiperDon.com site about things going on in my personal life.  This started with writing about a used truck I bought that needed attention (as-in repairs) and finally put me in the kind of vehicle I’ve dreamed of owning — I called these posts “Adventures in Truckdom”.  When I started doing contract SCUBA diving work this past summer I wrote about those experiences, too —  titled “Adventures in Divingdom”.  Each of these have no shortage of sharing what has gone on and includes me laughing at myself.  Today it seemed appropriate to write a different sort of episode — today I’m writing … book

ADVENTURES IN AUTHORDOM

Which goes like this …

MYODGC being my first book

For the past number of months I’ve been close to finishing my 2nd book — this being the Scottish & American military & patriotic Highland bagpipe tunes & tune histories book. For the most part I had to put it aside this summer — things just got too busy to give it the time and focus needed. The diving work (which was great!) took time, working on my day-job search takes time, juggling everything else takes time — priorities. I knew that once summer started winding down I could get back at it.

Bill Millin plays his pipes for fellow soldiers in 1944

The project is nearly complete however there are some chunks to go. Chief among these are writing a chapter opening — in this case, history around a bagpiper who landed on Sword Beach on D-Day, unarmed, and played pipes in traditional military fashion to lead his fellow invaders ….. and even though he as under heavy German fire he never got shot.

I have gathered a good bit of information around this historic gent — I’ve even made contact with his son and grandson on Facebook. This piper holds a special place in the piping community, and it’s important to me that I get this writing right. The kicker though is this …..

Landing on Queen Red Beach, Sword; Millin is in the foreground at the right with his bagpipes and backpack.

Of the various information sources available, some of them have mixed degrees of inaccuracies.  Part of my job is to sift through the minutia — do my best to separate the dubious bits from what appears to be the truth. To accomplish this I’m leaning toward the information that is consistent, the information that comes from cited sources, sources that are military record, and interviews that were from the man himself.  Part of the reason why I want to get my writing right is to honor the man.  Part of the reason is because of his importance to the Highland bagpipe community, and it is a HUGE honor to be writing about him.  And part of the importance is to help keep history accurate — some of these sources are muddying-up the facts.

So last night I got my first real opportunity to dive-back-in.  I reviewed all of this information, which includes these odd sections.  It’s a bit overwhelming but I can see the work ahead.  The long and short of it I know is this — once I have this bit of D-Day history written for the WWII chapter …. the rest of the work to complete the book project is all downhill eating cake wearing roller skates.

When will this be done?  Well … soon enough!  Besides, I have 2 other part-done book projects that are looking for me to get back to …

Keep an eye here! ~ Don

MYODGC is on GoodReads!

My book — Make Your Own Darn Good Cookies — has made it on GoodReads!

As you will recall I published in October 2018 — and Jacki Dilley was on it early, posting that December.  She kindly gave me a 5-star review — according to GoodReads 5-stars means “It was amazing!So, Jacki, if you’re reading this — THANK YOU. 🙂

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Meet Me – This Weekend!

Two Events This Weekend
Here on Whidbey Island!!!

This weekend I will be participating in not one but TWO meet-the-author events.  It will be a long weekend and I’m sure it will be a BLAST!!!  (WIBC calendar of events)

Goose Community GrocerThe first of these two events will be at Goose Community Grocery on Saturday between 10AM and 2PM.  From the sounds of it they are going to have a number of local authors who’s books are featured in the store, and I get to be one of them!  Goose is located in Bayview at 14485 HWY 525, Langley, WA 98260.  I will have a supply of my recipe books and a pen if you would like my scribble.  Come out, I’d enjoy meeting you — let’s talk baking and cooking!  I’m pretty sure Goose will be having BBQ on Saturday.  There’s even a chance my fellow author, friend, and new-podcast co-host Tom Trimbath will be there, too!

After Goose will be going to…

Saturday from about 3-6PM, after signing books at Goose, I plan to be at the Coupeville Arts & Crafts Festival.  More specifically, I’ll be at the tent in front of The Kingfisher Bookstore — located at 16 Northwest Front Street, Coupeville, WA 98239.  I will be back all day Sunday 10AM-5PM again joining Kingfisher.  More books will be available as I help Kingfisher’s owner, Meg, and her staff along with other local authors.  Come on out, get some great books, let’s talk MORE about cooking and baking, and if you like I’ll happily put my scribble in your book.

NOTE — Kingfisher Bookshop, pictured below just got a new paint job.  It is now handsomely brown with yellow trim.

The Kingfisher Bookstore

Tips For Writing Your Own Book

I consider myself still ‘new’ to the world of being an author.  Also, while I have learned a lot about starting and finishing a book project along with self-publishing, I’m still learning things.  People frequently tell me about books they’ve thought to write along with asking questions on how to go about their projects.  I’m happy to share what I’ve learned, because while book writing and self-publishing is kind of a crazy prospect, it’s also one I’ve found I greatly enjoy!

I’ve been considering writing a blog post including some tips from my experience writing and publishing, and after some recent questions — it’s time!  Here are some ideas for you to consider on how to make writing a book a more manageable project.  As I think up more tips I’ll blog about those too, so keep your eye here…

Reduce Redundancy

My first book was a recipe book.  I was told later by a more experienced self-published (and well researched) author that this is one of the more difficult types of books to write.  As I started my project I gave thought as to how I might make crafting my book as efficient as possible.  While I established a few things, I made LOADS of newbie mistakes.

In most cases a writer/author will go through their manuscript dozens if not countless times.  We check what we wrote, we rewrite for better quality — any number of reasons.  While this is important, it devours tons of time.  Increased labor can lead to lost passion in ones project — among other troubles.

One of the tips I received was to complete your writing (in MS Word, Notepad, etc), develop and decide upon your formatting, then as a last or near-to-last step go through your manuscript applying these characteristics.  If there is any way to work with a template that includes universal changes, all the better.

Work With A Schedule

Most of us are not full time writers and this happens on its own.  Our available writing time is structured as a result of a job, taking care of our family and pets, et cetera.  In either case, blocking-out time gives us …

  • Opportunity to write and work on the other aspects of our book projects
  • Self-discipline, structured progress, and removal of excuses not to work/write
  • A mechanism to tell those around us “Do Not Disturb” during a particular window of time.
  • A regular schedule slot to spend a little time promoting our books, ourselves as writers, and a time to engage with your followers

Take Breaks

Get some exercise, meditate, spend time with friends, do whatever it is you need to do to take care of you and to recharge your batteries.  ‘All work (on your book) and no play’ wears most people down.

Correct Your Own Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation As You Write

This seems like a no-brainer to me, an automatic thing to do, but I was told by an editor-friend that many writers Do Not Do This.  WWWWHHHYYYYY?!?!?  Not delivering the best work possible to an editor or publisher is not only sloppy, it lacks professionalism, wastes time, and potentially gets you turned-down for opportunities.

Sure, you’re an artist — you’re creating stories, worlds, characters — but you’re also working within a language, and if you cannot show that you know that language reasonably well how can you write it or impress upon anyone that you can lead them in that language as an author?!?  On some level you are a professional — if you get paid for even one copy of your book you are a professional — have some esteem.  Give your product and brand — which is not just your book, your series, but also You — the best representation possible at all times.

If your writing is in reasonably good order when you give it to an editor then it will be more efficient for them to process your work.  If you are paying them then that can mean it costs you less.  If you present writing to a publisher that is well put together, then you look well put together — you present yourself as a professional — they can comprehend your work and are going to be more likely to want to work with you.  It should go without saying but also…

Have All Of Your Writing And Supporting Notation In Order

Do not hand a mismanaged stack of papers to an editor or publisher for consideration.  Don’t give the excuse that organizing your work is someone else’s job or that they get paid for it.  NO, It Is Your Job.  “But it’s hard and confusing” — that’s an excuse — it’s difficult and confusing for someone else.  “It takes time away from being creative” — another excuse — if you know your characters/world/story then it ought to be little trouble for you to get this in order.  “I don’t feel like it” — Boo Hoo — I don’t feel like a lot of things, but buck up, that’s the job of a writer Vrs the half-effort of a slacker.  Get it Done.  Give someone your manuscript, not your mess.

Backup Your Hard Drive

Think about how much time you spend writing and bringing a book to fruition.  Time is money and hundreds of hours equates to thousands of dollars.  Now think about losing all of your work, all of your research, all of your notes, all of your development, and what it would take to recreate everything.  That’s not even considering the emotional impact.  I am speaking from the voice of experience — my first book was nearly done after (+/-) a year when the hard drive on my computer died.  It took another two years to recreate and completed my project — and that was partly with finding an early backup I forgot I had made.  Backing up your hard drive really takes little time.  Today there are products on the market that will do it automatically for you.  I cannot stress enough … BACKUP YOUR HARD DRIVE.